Vision: it must have taken a ton of imagination to envision what that was going to look like as you were creating! That is why you score a five for vision.
Originality: I haven't seen any other artwork with Judy Hopps like this one anywhere. Incredible originality scores you five stars on this as well!
Technique: You're technique and style are relatively good and work well in a sketch style like this. However if you wanted to vamp this up and make it even better, I would suggest better lighting and shading techniques. Especially on the eyes. Your posing looks amazing though! So I give this four stars.
Impact: Four stars here as well. Mostly for the originality of concept in the piece.
I hope this information helps,